Wretched Me (WIP Short)

I'm back and here with another story for blogbattlers. This is part of my WIP story which is the story I have been working on. Its just a small part, but I hope you like it.

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We parked outside the police station. The last place I thought I'd ever be. I felt like a wreck. The scenarios of what could happen were going through my head making me shake with nervous energy. 

“Don’t look so wretched.” Colter eyed me. “Play it cool.”

Play it cool. Easy for him to say. I got out of the pickup and managed to get it together, I thought about how I dealt with nerves before a big track competition. I was different and it didn’t matter, I would win. It was better to stay calm and take in every detail. I looked up at the sign in red lettering: Delta’s Police Department.

The place had long windows in the front. We walked in together. I was glad Colter was here. It made me feel like I was a kid. Who'd gotten into trouble and was here with an adult so she could apologize. I wasn’t a kid anymore, this was bigger than a minor offence. There was murder in the air and I somehow was involved. Which no one knew about yet. So I had nothing to worry about. I was wrong. I'm wrong about a lot of things.

We found ourselves in the detective’s office. It wasn’t at all fancy, it was just a side room where they had stuffed him along with a bunch of boxes. But if I remembered correctly he was a private detective so this was just an office. And he was just using it, he most likely had demanded for one and they gave in, giving him some old storage office. His name was Holstrum. Last name anyway. He sat down looking at us. I noticed he looked tired. I hoped he didn’t see through my disguise as he had a picture of me on the table. It was a little old. I was glad the leather jacket in the picture was not the same one I was wearing. I wore that one a lot. My clothing choice didn’t change much. 

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Sorry if it seems like just a taste, but I can't reveal too much.

Also I will be back to posting on Sunday.

What do you think of the story?

How do you think this is going to turn out?
Tell me bellow!
                                                                      

Questions Your Afraid too Ask //// Hiatus

Hello fellow humans! yes as you know I'm asking for your questions.

Of what you may ask?

Well ask me about horse training

ask me about writing

ask me questions your too afraid to ask

have fun of course I have a form if you want to ask that way (which is anonymous) or you can ask in the comments.

https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScu3lzZEe_sp0ELiw2E0yogiV4NnxuvWVnSUl9Tnn6Rs0Mi-Q/viewform

I'll be answering them in future posts.

And yes I will be taking a hiatus for a week or so. Not sure how long.  I just haven't had the energy to get a nice big post up. I feel like I don't have time to edit my posts properly. I may be doing some stuff on instagram so you can find me there @rahwrite

Have an awesome day!!!

What are you too afraid to ask?
Let's get real!  
Tell me below!

Glitter and Gold /// Songs On Repeat

I've been listening to lots of songs, half because of my new story, been trying to find songs that work with the story, and cuz I like to listen to songs while I'm writing.

Okay listen away...


Glitter and Gold ----- Barns Courtney 

Fun song that reminds me of one of my older books.

My Lighthouse ---- Rend Collective 

This song is just fun.

Don't Bring That Trouble ---- Needtobreathe 

We all love stories with some trouble???

Trouble ---- Avicii 

More trouble....... This song is good though. 

House of Gold --- Twenty One Pilots 

It has a good tune. Don't like much from this band.

......
Short post I know, but I've been really busy.

What songs are you listening to?
Do like to listen to music while writing?
Tell me below!!!

June Investigation 2020

The month is over. It was a really good month, so much has happened.

It's been getting warmer and not much rain....

I started the 100 for 100 Go Teen Writers summer challenge. It's been going good. I've gotten around 5k written so far.  Here is a bit of what my story is all about.

I'm still reading Ben-Hur 😅 I want to finish it. I suppose I did read the book of Psalms. The whole book; so that takes some reading time as well.

Everything has been busy with riding and getting ready for fair, which I hope will still happen.

Nala^ Me and Nala have been working on some obstacle course stuff. She really loves to learn new things. 

Went to a branding. It was very cool. A lot different then our branding.

 Yeah I learned how to wrangle a calf, though I just took some pictures first.

Also got to see a friend's goats. 

Went to town and took some pictures with this cool plane. That's Dad^...  For my sister's grad photos mostly.

Me sister. She got done with school this month. 

 On Father's Day we got to ride in this coach that has been going across the state of Montana.

It was supper cool and such a neat experience.  Another thing to mark off the list. LOL

Me with the plane too. It's a biplane bty. I love the cool Reto setting on my camera 

How was your month? 
Been doing any writing?
Tell me bellow!

My WIP //// Isolation Aesthetics

I've been working on this story, it doesn't really have a name, I call it, Isolation story as of now, it will change at some point. If you have an idea on a name, let me know!

This story started out as a short story idea that I hand for this contest that had a prompt : isolation. I didn't do the contest cuz it cost money, but I thought I would write something anyway. Now it has become a full story and I am writing it for 100 for 100 that Go Teen Writers is putting on. It's a fun story. I already have 8k words, though some of this I started before the 100for100. I'm kinda writing it by the seat of my pants. So I'm not all sure what will be happening. Enjoy a taste of the story......

Story Themes:

First point of view, mystery, darkness, light, journey, motorcycles, sarcastic, missing, hidden, sibling arc, leather, running, daring, rebel, professors, police, dad problems, arguing, taking a stand, loner, isolation, pickup, girl switch, mix up, deception, murder, kidnapped, bossy brother, past of secrets,

Want to see more check out my pinterest board.

pics from pinterest or canva.

The Characters: 

Felicity Jones

main character


Motorcycle girl, leather jackets, athlete, runner, college student, loner, rebel, blond, gray eyes, smart, watchful,


Colter Jones 

second character 


Older brother, pickup guy, down to earth, blue jeans, blond, brown eyes, caring, has his own secrets, trying not to be a rebel, 


Still working on other characters....

The snips: 

A black room. A white paper. A soft sound. Was it always this way?
Was something supposed to be happening?

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Oh. Well that puts a twist on things. My head was starting to hurt. My eyes drifted down to the desk. I saw a picture of Frances and almost flipped out.

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“Who was this professor?”

“I don’t know.” 

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 I racked my hands through my ringlets of blond hair. Where do I go from here? Connelsvill?
Where my last memory was before I found myself in the dark room with the paper?
This should be fun. I hoped my brother would go along with this.
I looked around for cars and broke out running.
.......

You know how some things just feel like home? Like a song you love and hear it again after a long time. That’s what my motorcycle was like to me.

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Music:

I've got a playlist on my spotify, you should be able to find it at; WIP: isolation or my name, Rakayle A. Sorry I don't know how to put that up that up on my blog.

Here is few songs anyway.

I feel like I'm just getting started with this story, so I'm still figuring things out.

What are you working on?
Do you like stories about siblings?
What do you think of this story?

Tell me below! Love to hear your thoughts!!!!
also happy Father's Day!!!

Awesome Blogger Award Tag

I got tag for today I was tagged in May, and here I am getting to it.

thanks Emily!

THE RULES:

1. Thank the person who nominated you.
2. Tag your post with #awesomebloggeraward.
3. Answer the questions you were asked.
4. Nominate at least 5 bloggers and inform them of their nominations.
5. Give them 10 new questions to answer.



1. What's your earliest memory?
Not sure a few early memories are kinda jumbled together and I don't know which one is first. But one of them is when me and my sister were siding down our porch ramp with our black winter sled. In the summer. 

2. If you had to choose one of your top 3 favorite books to never read again, which one would it be?
I don't always reread books but there are a few that I've reread a few times. I guess I would pick The Code of Silence by Tim Shoemaker 

3. Who's your favorite superhero?
I like Batman and Iron man. Of course Wolfgang from Blank Mastermind is one of my favorite. 

4. Would you rather live in the mountains or by the ocean?
Both are cool, I think the beach, by the ocean. 

5. How many fictional characters can you think of who share your first name?
HAhhaa, none. Let me know if you've ever seen my name in a book. ;)

6. Cake is 10x better with sprinkles: yes or no?
I like cake with sprinkles not sure if its better, but yes... its good. 

7. What one color would you associate with your personal aesthetic?
um, I'm not sure here is my pinterest board about me. I think brownish yellow is one of them....

8. Have you ever physically thrown a book because #emotions?
Um,, I don't think I have... 

9. If you could bring one fictional character to life, who would it be?
Uh, well this new character to this new story I've started. I would love to bring her to life. She is so cool.(keep a lookout for a post about it). Otherwise I think Charlie West from The Homelanders. It would be cool to bring him to life. 

10. What was your favorite drink as a child?
Most likely milk. 

I tag 
MovieCritic@ http://moviesmeetmatch.blogspot.com/
Faith @ http://fireflysstoryspace.blogspot.com/
Kara @ https://thebeautifullybrokenlifeblog.wordpress.com/
Loren @ https://plaidandsugar.blogspot.com/
Skye @ https://inkcalamities.blogspot.com/

The new questions
1. Next read?
2. One color that you would associate with your personal aesthetic?
3. Worst read this year?
4. How would you describe your style?
5. Favorite quote right now?
6. What is one book you own that you don't like?
7. Greatest summer time movie?
8. Winter writing or summer writing?
9. Have you ever lost a library book?
10. What do you like to do to stay active?

What is one of your personal aesthetic colors? 
Do you enjoy tags?
tell me bellow!!

My Progress in the Splits /// Update

I've been working a long time toward achieving my splits. It can be done. I wanted to do a post about this to give you, who want to get the splits, hope.  Getting so close is a huge for me. Just seeing the progress, may mean more to me that anyone else but, I want ya to see my progress.

Life's crazy, live crazier.....

One side it better than the other.... IT will always be this way.

Sometime in march.. I have no idea if theses pictures are in order.... close enough.

This one⇩Is slightly resent Here I'm showing what not to do; don't pop out your hip it may get you a little farther, but its not correct.

The correct way (bellow)

Remember to be warm when you stretch. Here are my other posts about that, workouts you can to to get warm /// hot; come on it makes it easier, my first post also there are some great stretches. 

Struggles ⇧

Getting closer on both sides.

I see that slight hip pop^. (Tip: taking some photos or videos might help you see what your doing wrong.)

Better. No hip out, which looks better, don't you think?

and better

It's hard ya'll, but we can do it.

I'm getting closer. But I'm not there yet.

Some days I fell so close and some days I fell so far away.

I will be doing some more updates on my instagram, but I wont stop with this series here. 

I'm not all the way down yet. But I'm not quitting. 

Are you working toward getting the splits?
How far are you along?
Tell me bellow! Let me know if you want any other tips I will be happy to help.