I Wrote a Premise /// Writing Help

Are you stuck in writing your awesome story? Do you know what to do next? Or are you just not motivated? Maybe you are. Or think you are. I learned about writing a premise from the Write Practise, today I want to share what I learned and give you some writing help.

I can't say I am a professional at this... Or that I know how to write a premise perfectly. I just want to share with you what I have learned and give your story a boost. It sure gave me a boost.


Here is one of the premises I did for my West Rover story:

The daring adventurer, only wants the Book, his stolen whip, and to get off the island. His long time enemy has all of the those, plus a gun. While trying to stay alive, the adventurer must help his enemy find the hidden treasure deep in the jungle.

I still might work on it some more later. 

🔎Here are each of the lessons on Write Practise; do go and watch the videos they are so worth it. If you would rather have them in you inbox to watch later I can forward the lessons to you.

Lesson 1

Lesson 2

Lesson 3

🔎So for a premise you have three structures. You want it to be short and explain you story.
You want the (1) Protagonist; my premises protagonist is the Daring adventurer.
next your (2)  your protagonist's goal; my adventurer wants off the island with his whip and the Book.
next (3) a crisis/ antagonist; mine is the long time enemy and finding the hidden treasure with out dying.

🔎If you want a work sheet for writing your premise you might find it on the website or I can email it to you.

Here are some other Premises I have started working on:

 ⇢This is a premise to my first story The Mystery of Jenkins Treasure:

A girl sleuth has a knack for solving mysteries along with three boys.
They find mystery in their own town. Helping a detective they must put the pieces together and
find a thief before he gets away.

⇢The next book The Historian's Secret:

The girl sleuth is in DC just for a vacation while she thinks she will miss out on a mystery.
The mystery is closer than she realized.
Along with the boys, they trek new ground in this big city and have bigger villains to catch,
and all before a museum is robbed.

🔎If you want to learn more about my West Rover story go HERE !

🔎My board for my other stories Here !

Have you written a premise?

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Write your premise in the comments! And tell me what you think...