tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5316402063560601007.post7773571331277060532..comments2023-09-11T01:50:59.845-07:00Comments on A Story Detective: Spill The Tea (WIP Short) Rakayle Hierhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09154816732176287290noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5316402063560601007.post-46638404645629207832020-09-22T16:18:16.548-07:002020-09-22T16:18:16.548-07:00So glad you liked it!! So glad you liked it!! Rakayle Hierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09154816732176287290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5316402063560601007.post-85964299671056368592020-09-22T15:06:34.582-07:002020-09-22T15:06:34.582-07:00Love your use of tea in this. Love your use of tea in this. Skye Hofferthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02385765274513034927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5316402063560601007.post-19850638155059398912020-08-30T07:45:08.371-07:002020-08-30T07:45:08.371-07:00Thank you for reading! ;) Thank you for reading! ;) Rakayle Hierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09154816732176287290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5316402063560601007.post-78751414902164955792020-08-30T07:43:55.353-07:002020-08-30T07:43:55.353-07:00Yes the Tea it is. :) Yes the Tea it is. :) Rakayle Hierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09154816732176287290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5316402063560601007.post-16248109694387829712020-08-30T07:42:48.377-07:002020-08-30T07:42:48.377-07:00Yes indeed so many questions.... A very good presu...Yes indeed so many questions.... A very good presumption! <br />Thanks! Hope you come back for more! ;) Rakayle Hierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09154816732176287290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5316402063560601007.post-16274486342410189012020-08-30T07:39:50.302-07:002020-08-30T07:39:50.302-07:00Oh, okay, yeah I say chips as in as you said crisp...Oh, okay, yeah I say chips as in as you said crisps. Lol. <br /><br />Thanks! Yeah there isn't very many leads yet, so a lot of leads going in all directions. They know a little more than they are telling eachother. ;) <br /><br />Can't wait for the prompt! Rakayle Hierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09154816732176287290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5316402063560601007.post-22579214273887283822020-08-29T15:22:40.833-07:002020-08-29T15:22:40.833-07:00Rakayle,
You wrote it without spilling your tea. I...Rakayle,<br />You wrote it without spilling your tea. I am intrigued to find out the next short episode without stepping on the broken chips. I love it! Jewell2https://www.blogger.com/profile/16287937368958783045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5316402063560601007.post-33599227516227604542020-08-29T08:11:45.653-07:002020-08-29T08:11:45.653-07:00And that, my dear, is the Tea.And that, my dear, is the Tea.Helena Georgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11511426093471571440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5316402063560601007.post-26724717197890158012020-08-28T09:47:55.199-07:002020-08-28T09:47:55.199-07:00So many questions and so little time! I have no an...So many questions and so little time! I have no answers for the narrator, but have several to add.... I presume the research they referred to was some kind of background information that could cast light on the murder,and perhaps it was something on the teachers? I also loved the playing around with the words at the end, where Tea takes on so much more meaning than a simple beverage. Hope to find out more! aebransonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12749092699828240859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5316402063560601007.post-41175024906672935792020-08-27T23:55:30.385-07:002020-08-27T23:55:30.385-07:00Intrigue continues Rakayle, mind you I did wonder ...Intrigue continues Rakayle, mind you I did wonder if the chips he found were pre-cooked or oven ready... then it dawned on me you may be using a different language tint meaning crisps (our term lol).<br /><br />I like the way it almost feels like no real leads giving rise to overthinking... suspicions growing in all directions. Do they know something or am I fabricating logic paths that creates a yes they do subconscious certainty.<br /><br />Next months prompt should really help here!Gary Jefferieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07276233291284300413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5316402063560601007.post-775410540039592222020-08-27T15:46:58.802-07:002020-08-27T15:46:58.802-07:00Thank you! ;D Thank you! ;D Rakayle Hierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09154816732176287290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5316402063560601007.post-64674887276721828432020-08-27T09:35:23.125-07:002020-08-27T09:35:23.125-07:00This is very intriguing! :)
www.melodypersonette...This is very intriguing! :) <br /><br />www.melodypersonetteauthor.blogspot.com Melody_Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16534479087364510578noreply@blogger.com